Watch the C Lydian 2 online guitar lesson by Robbie Calvo from 50 Modal Licks You MUST Know
I love just how melodic this lick is. A great opening line to a solo, in fact that's exactly what I did in the last lick of the course. You'll hear me string some of these ideas together over this progression to give you a sample solo.
I don't think there is anything here to concern you technically. My only suggestion really is to make sure you keep the notes that are played with glissandi nice and smooth and of course in time.